18 November 2010

Hubbard Park At Dusk

Here I sit with the melting sky,
the sun sunken behind bald mountains,
the trees: just sticks I can see through,
the screams and laughter and stomping feet of the boys behind me
and the light fading imperceptibly so

and somehow I know
that each tall pine standing in a circle around me
appreciates the sound of the children's laughter
piercing the silence
ever so shockingly often.


KrisUnderwood said...

That last line is a mouthful!

sam-poet said...

I know but I kinda like the way it makes you slow down to say it, kind of like how I had to slow down to appreciate my surroundings and to write the poem.

Do you think it works or doesn't work?