09 December 2010

Truro Sunset

When it drops below the water
that’s only the beginning.
Musical notes drop and drift
like layers upon layers of clouds glowing

and the foam on the crest
of the waves are even whiter
than the corners of your eyes.

Sky blue pink, but there’s more than that
more than the last licks of
the fire hat of the sky.

There were seven kings of Rome
your dad tells me.
Here we sit the four of us
watching night arrive, silent
as the common man.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love this. I love the transition from sky to person to group. I love the feeling of connection and independence (it's a poem... that's what it feels like to me. I celebrate my right to my opinion :)

Sam Poet said...

Thanks! I never noticed the sky to person to group sequence before. Neat! Thanks for reading and reacting.